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I've been designing a logo for my new web business, Panthr. Here's what I have: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/457680/logo.png I have my doubts about the "r" being so prominent, but tell me what you think. v2: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/457680/logo-v2.png v3: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/457680/logo-v3.png v4: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/457680/logo-v4.png
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I think, without the r, it would look pretty bland.. I think it looks cool as is to be honest
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love it; only change i would make is to line up the panthers paws with the bottom of the text so that it is all aligned
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I agree with WelshStew about aligning it. But that looks really good! How did you do that panther, if you don't mind me asking?
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I've been experimenting, and the panther looks pretty sexy in black. The text, however, does not. I'll keep on messing around until I can get it perfect. One of my friends in a really good artist, so she drew it for me and I traced it in InkScape.
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Ok, version 2. I aligned the text and panther, and made the grey darker. What do you think? http://dl.dropbox.com/u/457680/logo-v2.png
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Definitely an improvement, the darker colour looks very nice. Call me mad, but does that capital 'P' look further away than the rest of the text? I could be tired, or just insane... But... I don't know lol - it looks as if it should be moved to the right a bit...?
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The darker text makes the 'r' stand out less, so I guess it depends how you want it to look. The darker panther looks so much better.
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Panther... not sure im seeing what you are.. all I can see is: ![]() :D (looking real nice by the way) |
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Changed the font. Do you like it better or worse? http://dl.dropbox.com/u/457680/logo-v3.png
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